Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen sh*te Yatta - Vol. 1 Ch. 3.2 (2024)

Nightdotexe said:

I hate this.
Okay, the dude is good-looking and people only noticed when he actually cared for himself. I give the manga that.
But he is also secretly a really good runner without any training or exercise?
Bullsh*t. Suspension of disbelief destroyed.

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This lmao.
I was first thinking "oh, of course he's handsome and now everyone's gonna be friendly with him, yay" ironically. But then I also thought that I might be too harsh since the guy was abused for years. But now I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking it's too cliché... I was happy to discover a story with the bully being put at their place tho but the dude is just too perfect, he literally have nothing to work on, to heal from after all those years of mistreating, everything is just at the best for him without any efforts like he just needed to say "hey, don't bully me anymore" and tadaa, he have lot of friends, a girl is interested in him, he's super good at sports and even other students come to ask his help, just wtf lol.
I still kinda like the story, I would like to see where it's going, if it's going deep down in cliché or if it's taking another way.

Ghehehe said:

See Also

Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen sh*te Yatta - Ch. 21.1Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen sh*te Yatta - Vol. 1 Ch. 1Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen sh*te Yatta - Ch. 21.1Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen sh*te Yatta

This lmao.
I was first thinking "oh, of course he's handsome and now everyone's gonna be friendly with him, yay" ironically. But then I also thought that I might be too harsh since the guy was abused for years. But now I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking it's too cliché... I was happy to discover a story with the bully being put at their place tho but the dude is just too perfect

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Would you like a story where the MC's good points are only his good looks? I don't really understand why the MC being athletic is a cliché.

Kanuan19 said:

Would you like a story where the MC's good points are only his good looks? I don't really understand why the MC being athletic is a cliché.

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It's cliché because, first, the good looking thing basically poped up after him cuting hair and the reactions were so exagerrated (it's seen a lot of time in manga and even in movies/books not related to manga).

It's cliché bc many authors just make random characters around say "MC is the pretiest person omg" whitout actually make a design that could be showing that obviously. Tbh, the artsyle is pretty to me but the mc doesn't particularly looks more gorgeous than the other classmates.

Same with the athletic hidden skills lmao: at the start of the chapter mc said himself he doesn't know his capacities, that he always tried his best to get was average grades in p.e, and dude never praticed in YEARS (bc of the bully).
He was literally in kindergarden the first time he ran so fast that he won a price, bro is now in highschool and never even practiced or anything (last time he ran "fast" was under the rain to go meet the bully at night and after that dude ended at the hospital 💀) and you gonna tell me it's not cliché to just make a character suddenly skilled at something they barely tried? Even if he was talented to start with, it needs practice.

I think the whole thing so far is taking shortcuts idk what is not cliché about that, you can find the same things in other mangas with other themes (like, injustified powerup: shounen use that a lot, suddenly looking good even tho the design is not that special and they just changed one thing: many shoujo do that too). If it's not cliché it's poorly written then.

He could totally be handsome, gain many friends and even be super good at sports but here it just feels rushed/too easy for no reason and that's why it's cliché.
So no, the problem is not even that the mc looks good. Adding "good points" to the MC is easy if it's just how it's done.

Nightdotexe said:

I hate this.
Okay, the dude is good-looking and people only noticed when he actually cared for himself. I give the manga that.
But he is also secretly a really good runner without any training or exercise?
Bullsh*t. Suspension of disbelief destroyed.

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idk, but if we were to look at earlier chapter, the bitch ex always force him to go here and there within time limit. ig it's not an easy deal. she might be forbid him from running full speed at school bc people that knows him will notice how fast he's actually. but outside school? who knows 🤷

Nightdotexe said:

I hate this.
Okay, the dude is good-looking and people only noticed when he actually cared for himself. I give the manga that.
But he is also secretly a really good runner without any training or exercise?
Bullsh*t. Suspension of disbelief destroyed.

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He already mentioned how often Hanabi used to make him run, plus he was holding back all those years thanks to her words, so no that isn't bullsh*t

Right? Even tho it's been stated that he's always been a gifted runner since he was a child

People act like he's been that way since the start and him having that speed was completely out of left field

People just pick and choose what they read instead of actually paying attention to what they're reading

Kanuan19 said:

Would you like a story where the MC's good points are only his good looks? I don't really understand why the MC being athletic is a cliché.

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H25yuki said:

idk, but if we were to look at earlier chapter, the bitch ex always force him to go here and there within time limit. ig it's not an easy deal. she might be forbid him from running full speed at school bc people that knows him will notice how fast he's actually. but outside school? who knows 🤷

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This, this is 100% the case here, people are saying that he "never trained before" but forget how often she made him run (to meet up with her within a ridiculous time frame) that in itself is training

But that's too much thinking for them so it's just easier to call it a "cliche"

Hanabi needs a slap in her bitch face.

Thanks for the chapter

thycondrius said:

Hanabi needs a slap in her bitch face.

Thanks for the chapter

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She needs a pat
In the face
With a steel chair